Do I really need to explain myself with this one. I have not felt good about how I have been acting as of late but feel that I have blossomed into a new person. I have never felt this good about myself in quite a while and need you to be there by my side to take it all in.
i wish words could be returned to sender or at least i could remember/
that a woman of your stature is still delicate it means your heart is tender/
can you call it remorse if things don’t change but of course it isn’t the same/
i’ve made changes necessary to keep your name from crippling my brain/
plain and simple you know my love flows like the rain or ripples in the ocean/
i don’t feign devotion and i try my hardest not to be fickle with emotions/
you should know you bring out the best in me i don’t want the rest you see/
indeed respect should be an expectancy and now i guess the test will be/
if i can show you more of that because it’s been sorely missing as of late/
i don’t take pride in my actions in fact i’m ashamed of what i can create/
March 5, 2008 at 4:50 am
Beautiful words from a beautiful heart.
March 6, 2008 at 6:55 am
so honest. I would have like someone to write such words to me. quite heartfelt.
March 13, 2008 at 6:20 am
We do not need to explain it anyone. We only oweit ourselves. Very honest post!
March 13, 2008 at 8:19 pm
I can always hear your poems, there is a flow to them that makes me mouth them aloud as I read. Do you read them aloud?
You use a number of unexpected words-fickle, expectancy, remorse, etc.-none of which are terribly uncommon, but rare enough reading them, is a treat.